Kylie J

And I thought wouldn't rip me off. What were you thinking the last time you came on YWS?

The last line does have the Jr. High sense, like Misty Lynn said, and if that's what you were going for, you got it. Personally, I would take out the ...

Well, the first stanza was enjoyable. It had great descriptions and made sense to me. The rest was a blur. I didn't get the third stanza. I think I understand ...

Thanks. I'm mostly into fantasy/sci-fi, but I like thrillers too, and sometimes religion.

I've been first chair since I started, but like you said, it's cause everyone else sucks. Private lessons make all the difference!

First let me say, this was very well-written. I once posted a story without describing enough of the character's background, and it did not fare well with reviews. Your story ...

Sorry if the title offends you, but I wear that badge with honor - I'm a flute girl myself. Anyway, I've just noticed that a lot of people post about ...

I think we need a clearer idea of what the story's going to be about before we give suggestions. Also, what exactly do you want help with? Plot? Character? Chapter ...

*tries not to sound too tacky* I'm happy 'cause everyone else is.

Well, it's summer, which means I actually have time to curl up with a few good books. Usually, I take my summer to wipe out a series that looks really ...

The difficulty I had with this is that I didn't know what it was talking about. My French isn't that great, but from the title I knew it was something ...

I wonder how this thing works...... What were you thinking the last time you saw someone with an mp3 player / iPod?

Well, that's what you get for buying stuff from the dollar store.... What were you thinking when you last saw your best friend?

wow, here's some irony: There was one murder and six rapes last year and two murders and three rapes this year. But all the rapes were committed by local men ...

Maybe if I hit the crosswalk button...... What were you thinking the last time you went down the stairs?